When I was young
I’d stare at the sun rays crashing into the kitchen mug
In bed I’d stay just to keep my feet all snug
I’d prance in a flare protesting fragile resemblance to my dolls’ porcelain skin
A girl carefree as the word had ever been
When I was young
I’d hold my family like an hourglass in motion with the sands
The memories coupled in the smallest of hands
I’d shout to the winds to gently nudge at me
To throw my body swiftly for the world to see
When I was young
I’d plead with the ants to create their voetjie voetjie gestures
My grandfather was an old man but Peterpan in stature
The edges of a hammer seemed significant and powerful
Distorting nature while carving something just as beautiful
When I was young
Numbers and symbols became one musical note
Summer showers always made it in time for my flowery coat
My words were flimsy with a heart that was wild
I germinate in her spirit as a grown-up child.
This line captured my heart and summarised my childhood perfectly :). “I’d stare at the sun rays crashing into the kitchen mug.”
I find the reasons for my addictions in the lines of this poem.
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When I was young…I couldn’t understand such peoms. But I’m sure
“My grandfather was an old man but Peterpan in stature”
Truly takes me back to when I was young…wish you could see the smile on my face
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The ever after things..I’m humbled
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Thanks for sharing such a great poem with us. This brings back some childhood memories. You’re a great writer Phila :).
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when i was young is a truely
beautiful poem
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